Thursday, February 27, 2014

MGP #1 Rewrite

  Student
Dear Diary,
I’m starting to not like high school anymore it’s stressing me out. It’s like my teacher is picking on me whenever it’s time to read aloud in class. I get nervous palms begin to sweat, and start reading ahead to make sure I understand my paragraph before it’s my turn to read. One day I was counting heads and paragraphs to see which paragraph I’ll get and the teacher called my name to read. The paragraph was the hardest of them all, it was about 1000 words long; long as the longest interstate in the world the words I couldn’t pronounce like a Chinese person learning English and I was scared. (amplication) I had to read the paragraph or else everyone in the class would know I couldn’t read. Well I could read but I couldn’t read like the normal kids like at the fast pace I had my own pace but to the normal kids they’ll think my reading was funny. So I started to read the paragraph aloud to the class.

 Teacher
Dear Diary,
I’ve noticed today that one of my students in the class suffer from a reading disorder. When I called on her to read today she hesitated and looked nervously around the class at the rest of the students. Don’t get me wrong she read the passage but she struggled throughout the 5 sentences. Maybe I’ll have my aide do some extra side tutoring with her.

Student
Dear Diary,
The teacher pulled me aside after class and asked me do I like to reading. She drilled me with questions and I finally told her I have a reading disorder and she said she could solve that problem for me well try to help as much as she can.

Teacher
Dear Diary
I think I scared her by asking her about her problem but it’s up to me to help her out when I see someone struggling in my class. I really think she’ll enjoy Mrs. Flowers. During class they’ll go to the library for more one on one time.

Student
Dear Diary
I was researching a solution to help other kids like me that struggle with reading disabilities in the classroom. I’m getting better in the classroom reading aloud because of the extra help with Mrs. Flowers. She really takes the time out to help me when I’ve messed up in my reading. When I had some extra time left in class she let me access the computer to do some research on this project. The article that I found gave me a lot of information about children dealing with learning disabilities. Now I can try to set up an appointment with the board of education to help fund this project in the schools. I know this is a big thing and is going to coat a lot of money but it’s beneficial to the children with reading disabilities.

Teacher
Dear Diary
Brittany is a very smart girl she researched a possible answer to help others like her that are struggling with reading in classrooms. So I gathered up all the English teachers and anyone else that wanted to help out with this project. Brittany smiled from ear to ear when she found all the people in the library ready to help with her own idea.

Student
Dear Diary
With the help of all the staff and students we managed to come up with a presentation to present to the board of education to see if they could pass this idea!!!

Teacher
Dear Diary
 Today is a big day for the staff and I we are going to visit the board of education committee with us luck!!!! J

Student
Dear Diary
WE DID IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! I made a team all by myself. I managed to take on a huge project with the help of my team. We did it if it wasn’t for them I would still be struggling in class with my reading. I’m so happy that today I’m not going to write a lot because we’re going out to celebrate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Teacher
Dear Diary
YES!!!!!!!!!!!! The board of education passed this idea and our school is the first time test taker to see if it’ll actually work to see if the children are reading.

Student
Dear Diary
It’s a new year and a new start in high school with the advantages of the new technology we’re using in the classrooms for the children with reading disabilities. The board of education and a couple more sponsors helped fund this project by donating 3 million dollars. This project allows classroom to use audio book to help children with reading disabilities. The teachers love this idea because they say the audio books help out a lot with children struggling to read. Studies have shown that students with learning disabilities that use the audio books love to read now. They have increased their reading skills also.

BoE
Dear Diary
To see a student step out of her comfort zone and let everyone know about her reading disorder is a big deal. So we fund this project to help out the ones in classrooms that struggle with reading disabilities and are afraid to speak up. We’re waiting to do this worldwide in every school to see if this actually works. We had the students take a test before and they’ll take one after to see if there is any improvement. We don’t want to waste our money on something that’s irreverent to school.

Teacher
Dear Diary
Ooowwwwweee with the help of these new audio books Brittany and a lot more students love to read! The books we’re a great idea to bring into the classroom. It makes learning fun to those with dyslexia or other reading disabilities.

Student
Dear Diary
I love to read reading is love. (antimetabole) I read at home at church and almost anywhere I can. With the help of the audio book app I can download any type of book to read because as soon as a book is released in paper form it’s also released in the audio form as well.

Teacher
Dear Diary
Without the improvement of technology we wouldn't be able to do a lot of things we do on a daily basis. I can download different books relating to my work for school at home to be prepared for the next day.

Student
Dear Diary
I’m proud of myself for making this project happens but I didn't realize all the money that’ll be spent to make all this happen. Even though the department of education spent over 20 million dollars to create audio books for children with reading disabilities now children aren't afraid to read aloud in class. (antanagoge) some of the parents argue about the money issue because they say it could have gone to something more important. Little does these parents know that this is a huge issue that a lot of people like to look over. Most of the northern schools have these audio books in classroom but i really don’t know when they’ll be in the southern states.

BoE
Dear Diary
We saw I huge improvement with the audio books in classrooms that we’ve deceived to fund a couple more schools which results in a lot more money. This isn’t a cheap project but it’s worth the education. We are still amazed that a young student thought about this idea instead of a teacher or principal. Some parents might think we’re wasting money because their child can read but this is a huge deal that a lot of people ignore but it’ll take time to spread audio books everywhere.

Student
Dear Diary
Now that everyone has their own audio book in the class the teacher has to go around and log everyone in one by one. Some teachers say it’s a stressful job at times but the students are learning with technology that is starting to rule the world. The students learn faster with technology then just listening to a teacher stand up and lecture.

Teacher
Dear Diary
Audio books we’re a great invention to classrooms and maybe we could do a project on how technology has improved our lives. I can’t wait to start teaching again August to the students that hasn’t experience the audio books.

Student
Dear Diary
Its summer time and school is out. I was voted most courageous and won. Everyone knew who I was throughout high school because I made a big move actually made the big move happen. Every second I’m reading every minute I’m reading every hour I’m reading every day I’m reading all because of audio books. (anaphora) now I’m not afraid to bring up my story about my reading disability or read in front of a big crowd, it wasn’t for audio books I’ll still be shy reading ahead of the class to see what paragraph I’ll have to read aloud or worry about my classmates laughing at me. I've got a friend that lives down south audio books haven’t reached them yet and whenever someone brings up her disorder she’ll deny it and act as if she’s lost and changes the subject. (Apophasis) hopefully the whole world will be able to use audio books in classrooms for children with learning disabilities because the audio books really do work.  


Tuesday, February 4, 2014

Rhetorical Devices

1. Hyperbole (noun) Synonyms- embellishment and rhetoric

  • exaggerated statements or claims not meant to be taken literally
  • you can bring life into a boring joke/story into a funny one
 (example- He is as skinny as a toothpick.) (example- She is so dumb, she thinks)
  • they can make people buy products studies have shown that 75% of ads use at least one figure of speech
 (example- "adds amazing luster for infinite mirror-like shine")

2. Hypophora (noun) (Origin from a Greek IPOFORA- meaning carrying under or putting under) Syn.- antipophora
  • figure of speech in which the speaker poses a question & then answers the question.
 (example- What should young people do with their lives today? Many things, obviously.)
  • it is similar to a rhetorical question only it gets answered while a rhetorical question doesn't.

3. Hypotaxis (noun) (Origin from a Greek word subjection) Syn.- parataxis
  • the subordination of one clause to another 
(example- One December morning near the end of the year when snow was falling moist and heavy for miles all around, so that the earth and the sky were indivisible, Mrs. Bridge emerged from her home and spread her umbrella.)
  • gives off an emotional cast to the writing points clearly at what is important and what should be read with the most weight. 
(examples related to us- I had to drink because I was thirsty.) (When I go out, I feel happy.)

4. Litotes (noun) (Origin from a Greek word SIMPLE)
  • ironical understatement in which an affirmative is expressed by the negative of its contrary.
  • emphasize an idea or situation rather then minimizing their importance. 
(example- "You won't be sorry", meaning you'll be glad.)
  • employs an understatement by using double negatives or in other words positive statements is expressed by negating its opposite expressions
(example- The ice cream was not to bad) (Your apartment is not unclean.)

5. Metabasis Syn.- Transition (Origin from a Greek word METABAIO meaning to pass over)
  • a change from one subject to another 
  • a transitional statement in which one explains what has been and what will be said or done.
(example- You have heard how the proposed plan will fail; now consider how an alternative might succeed)

Sunday, February 2, 2014

Disadvantages

                                                              DEPENDENCY

  • people depends on all the forms of technology today and if a computer crashes or machines break humans would become disable
  • people becomes less self-reliant 

ADVANTAGES

                                                   Great Discoveries in All Industries
  • shows people more efficient ways to do things 
  • education greatly advanced because of computers
  • agricultural processes improved because it was once done by humans now its done by machines
  • medical discoveries occur at a much more rapid rate thanks to machines and computers 

Think Before We Act

Technology is so advanced now that the secret services can find out everything we do with our "smartphones".